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Comments on "Observation of the decay Bs -> Dphi"
=== Title/Abstract: ===
As a byproduct of the analysis of the normalisation sample, you also give an measurement of the Bs->DbK*b/B->DbK*b ratio of branching fractions, but this is not reflected in the title.
That update might therefore go by unnoticed, which would be a pity.
Why not: Observation of the decay Bs->Dbphi and updated of the Bs->DbK*b branching fraction.
=== Introduction: ===
The current description of the physics case is misleading. As written, it is suggested that by simply collecting a larger sample of Bs->Dbphi one will be able to measure the CKM angle gamma unambiguously, which is not the case. In fact, the mode Bs->Dbphi itself is not sensitive to gamma. One needs the combined information from Bs->Dbphi and Bs->Dphi to extract gamma and in addition also Bs->D(CP)phi to get an unambiguous solution.
We think the presentation of the physics case would benefit:
- when showing Feynman diagrams
- from a discussion of the modes involved and their differences
- from a clear explanation of which modes you are and are not measuring, and why. [Are you distinguishing between the D and Dbar? Why is Bs->Dphi not measured?]
As this is only a branching ratio measurement, some of the details regarding the determination of gamma [like time-integrated vs time-dependent] could be left out and/or replaced by references only.
L.29: eigenstates
L.33: "sufficient number of different D final states" could you say how
many?
=== Event Selection: ===
L. 69: "high sum of the pt of the tracks", could you specify the cut more precisely, or reference to the trigger document [12] which has the required information on the topo lines?
L. 89: For the cut on the flight distance of B->Dbar K*, you probably corrected for the acceptance. How large was this correction?
L.122: larger than 0.2 is irrelevant to the reader as no distributions are given. Please remove.
L.124: which assumptions on the BF? Why did you not use the Punzi FoM
that avoids the problem?
Line 123: Why did you chose S/Sqrt(S+B) as the optimisation criteria. The Punzi FoM is better suited for optimising for first observations.
Line 124: Please give the "assumptions on the decay branching fraction".
Line 126: Please specify what you define as the signal region. Is it the whole mass range 5150 to 5600 MeV?
=== Signal Yield: ===
Figure 2:
- Why are there no red data points between -0.4 and 0.3? If the cut at 0.4 is already applied, you would not expect to see an event at 0.3.
- If bins with zero events where suppressed, why is there a partial red line in the -0.3 to -0.2 bin?
- the difference between the red/blue is very difficult to distinguish in a black and white printout. Can the colors be changed?
L.133: You decide not to use the information of whether you have a
DbarK* or a DbarK*bar final state and hence are loosing information.
With that info you would have 2 mass plots with the same B, resp Bs
signal but half the background. Why don't you do that?
Figure 1:
- Bs->DbarK*bar (bar missing)
- The fit for the partially reconstructed background in pink does not look very convinding. Maybe the RooKeysPdf tuning is too fine?
L.173: is -> are
L.201 and later : ^{bkg} -> ^{\rm bkg}
Line 164: Change "Figure" to "Fig."
Line 203: Does this result on fs/fd already contain the latest improvements from CLEO-c?
=== Systematic uncertainties: ===
L.219: contribution->'contributions' or 'the contribution'
L.226: could you explain why you have a fit bias?
L.237-242: you account for DCS decays but not for double mis-ID which give you a broader D mass. How are they treated?
Line 237: It would be helpful to write (part of) the information in this paragraph already in the introduction.
=== Results and Conclusions: ===
- Line 246+9: Change reference [20] to [8] as the LHCb result is the only entry in the PDG.
- f_s/f_d should be in math mode. Are you using the latest
error with the new CLEO measurement?
- "... compared to a previous measurement [20]" : If it's one measurement
cite it and not the PDG.
=== References: ===
Line 266: The arxiv link is broken. Remove "hep-ph/"