Dear all,
There's an important paper for us: The first evidence of CP violation in
baryons. It would also be our 2nd paper going to Nature Physics.
Anyone volunteering to collect comments?
Thanks
Patrick
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Subject: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2016-030,
Probing matter-antimatter asymmetries in $\Lambda^0_b$-baryon decays
Date: Mon, 18 Jul 2016 15:32:41 +0200
From: Michael Schmelling <Michael.Schmelling(a)mpi-hd.mpg.de>
To: LHCb General mailing list <lhcb-general(a)cern.ch>
Dear Colleagues,
A draft paper is available for your comments:
Team leaders, please verify the author list and check for reading obligations of your group!
Note that in view of ICHEP the circulation has been shortened from 2 weeks to 10 working days.
Title : Probing matter-antimatter asymmetries in $\Lambda^0_b$-baryon decays
Journal : Nature Physics
Contact authors : Jinlin_Fu, Nicola_Neri, Maurizio_Martinelli, Andrea_Merli
Reviewers : Steve_Playfer (chair),
Mike_Sokoloff
EB reviewer : Mat_Charles
EB readers : Michael_Schmelling, Simon_Eidelman
Analysis note : ANA-2014-077
Deadline : 29-Jul-2016
e-group : lhcb-paper-2016-030-reviewers
Link : https://cds.cern.ch/record/2199884
Authors : LHCb
Twiki : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/viewauth/LHCbPhysics/LambdabTophhh
The following institutes are requested to make institutional comments:
NIKHEF__Amsterdam__The_Netherlands
Edinburgh__United_Kingdom
UFRJ__Rio_de_Janeiro__Brazil
Bucharest-Magurele__Romania
Padova__Italy
PNPI__Gatchina__Russia
Please send any comments via the CDS system. It is the responsibility
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this, there will be a final meeting of the editorial board, with
contact authors and reviewers present, when final decisions will be
made. As the last step, the collaboration will be given a final opportunity
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You can find all paper and conference report drafts open for comments
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Best regards,
Michael
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Michael Schmelling, MPI for Nuclear Physics
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Hi all,
This paper is assigned to us, with deadline tomorrow.
https://cds.cern.ch/record/2200803
I paste here my comments. Please let me know if someone else was looking
at it, so we can merge comments. Else I'll submit tomorrow.
Dear Xabier, Cédric, Murilo,
Here are my comments on the paper.
L.2: say why it is interesting.
L.3: spell out SM. events -> cross-sections (or production)
L:5: large momentum fraction of what?
L.8: suggest to add some space between + and bb (or cc)
L.22-35: This is too detailed for an introduction. At this level the
reader does not want to know which flavour of BDT you used. This section
could be moved to a separate section 3 and shortened here.
L.23: extract -> determine
L.33: cross-sections
L.44: (natural units are used with c=1)
L.76: The same
L.78: max in roman
L.104: I fail to understand this sentence
L.111: I suggest to apply my suggestion to the CONF of using \ell to
mean e or mu
L.135: Fig. 1
L.142: is is
L.171: extraction -> determination
L.172. Why binned? And a fit to what?
L.175: considering -> assuming that
L.178: to the expected yields assuming the SM
L.184: Wilks'
Table 1: just -> only
Fig.2: remove "data"
L.190-191: this is not a sentence
L.193: "matched with a beauty/charm quark" sounds odd. Tagged as beauty
or charm?
L.195: in Table 2
L.196: in Figure 6.
Fig.2 and 3: W+bb and tt are indistinguishable in BW. Use
colorbrewer2.org to define your colour scheme.
L.200: add lumi uncertainty.
L.201: collaboration.
L.205+ : use align environment.
References:
- Take all LHCb refs from template
- Add collaboration wherever needed
[9] Use correct title from paper
Cheers,
Patrick
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Patrick Koppenburg Nikhef, Amsterdam
http://www.koppenburg.org/address.html
Dear all,
I submitted our comments, which can be found on https://cds.cern.ch/record/2196763 <https://cds.cern.ch/record/2196763>
Greetings,
Gerco
> On 23 Jun 2016, at 20:34, Michael Schmelling <Michael.Schmelling(a)mpi-hd.mpg.de> wrote:
>
> Dear Colleagues,
>
> A draft paper is available for your comments:
>
> Team leaders, please verify the author list and check for reading obligations of your group!
>
> Title : Measurement of the $C\!P$-violating phase and decay-width difference in $B^0_s \to \psi(2S)\phi$ decays
>
> Journal : PLB
> Contact authors : Dianne_Ferguson, Greig_Cowan
> Reviewers : Marcel_Merk (chair),
> Paul_Seyfert
> EB reviewer : Jeroen_van_Tilburg
> EB readers : Nicola_Serra, Michael_Schmelling
> Analysis note : ANA-2013-015
> Deadline : 7-Jul-2016
> e-group : lhcb-paper-2016-027-reviewers
> Link : https://cds.cern.ch/record/2164477
> Authors : LHCb
> Twiki : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/view/LHCbPhysics/Bs2psi2Sphi
>
> The following institutes are requested to make institutional comments:
> NIKHEF_VU__Netherlands__University_of_Groningen__Netherlands
> Ferrara__Italy
> Frascati__Italy
> MPIK__Heidelberg__Germany
> Manchester__United_Kingdom
> Cagliari__Italy__Aachen__Germany
>
>
> Please send any comments via the CDS system. It is the responsibility
> of the contact authors to provide replies to all comments
> made. Subsequent modifications to the draft will be made in
> consultation with the reviewers and during the EB reading. Following
> this, there will be a final meeting of the editorial board, with
> contact authors and reviewers present, when final decisions will be
> made. As the last step, the collaboration will be given a final opportunity
> to comment during a “silent approval” period.
>
> You can find all paper and conference report drafts open for comments
> via the EB web-page, by clicking on Current Drafts:
>
> http://lhcb.web.cern.ch/lhcb/lhcb_page/collaboration/organization/editorial…
>
> Best regards,
> Michael
>
> --
> Michael Schmelling, MPI for Nuclear Physics
> Phone:+49-6221-516-511 Fax:+49-6221-516-603
>
>
>
>
- Gerco
Dr. C.J.G. Onderwater
Van Swinderen Institute
University of Groningen
Nijenborgh 4
NL-9747 AG Groningen
the Netherlands
Tel. +31(0)50-3633557 / 8774