Dear all,
We just got a response to our comments to the Lc->pmumu paper.
Please have a look if your comments were properly addressed.
From a quick look by me, it looks quite okay.
Cheers,
Mick
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The comment (LHCB-PAPER-2017-039-001-COMMENT-005) that you made on LHCB-PAPER-2017-039-001
(entitled: 'Search for the suppressed $\Lambda^+_c \to p \mu^+ \mu^-$ deacy and observation of the $\Lambda^+_c \to p \omega$ decay') has itself been commented on by Mariusz Witek [CERN - EP/ULB] (mariusz.witek(a)cern.ch).
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Dear all,
We just got the replies from Marcin to our comments. As they are
presenting at the Implications workshop, they just responded to physics
questions.
The main criticism we had, not showing the efficiency in bins of q^2,
will be adressed (they forgot to put the plot in the paper, apparently).
One thing that is still not clear to me is what result the fit gives in
the non-resonant region.
I propose we ask them to show the fit with signal and background
included, and then I would be happy for them to show this at the
Implications.
Please give me any comments you might still have as soon as possible
(today), so the proponents still will have time to look at them.
Cheers,
Mick
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Dear Mick,
Thank you for your comments. We will address the editorial comments
later. For know (in rush for implications workshop) please find our
answer for the physics comments:
L. 104 So the sWeighted data agrees with simulation after the
pre-selection and first BDT cut? How well does it agree before the BDT cut?
Before the BDT cut, we don’t have Lc peak to check this(to large background)
- L.147: We disagree with this strategy. As you do not provide an
efficiency map versus the Dalitz plane, interested readers cannot recast
your limit to their favourite model. You actually do not even give an
indication of how the efficiency varies on the DP. We suggest you either
assign a systematic uncertainty or provide an efficiency map.
We apologize for this. We have planned to include the efficiency map in
the paper all along(it is in our ANA note), but in rush towards the
implications workshop we forgot to put it in. it will appear for sure in
the next version.
- L.153: We hope that what you did is not what is described in the text.
The polynomial pdf describes the background, not the non-resonant
region. You must have tried to fit the \Lc somehow in order to get a
limit. Why don't you show the peak (which my be negative) and give the
fitted yield?
I think there is a confusion. The polynomial refers in this case to the
background component. We will try to make it clear.
L. 155 So sigma is fixed, also for the normalisation channel? Would it
be possible to float it in data, at least for systematics? We did not
find a mass shape systematic in the ana note.
We did this for the first version, however it turned out they are
consistent so RC suggested to drop it.
L. 166 Which systematic uncertainties are included in the CLs? It makes
sense that the stat. error on Lc -> p mu mu and Lc -> p phi are both
included.
They are of course included.
Figure 3 Do you also have this plot for lower and higher masses? There
should be a range for q^2 from 0 to 1350 MeV. If it is basically empty,
it would be good to mention.
We could provide this plot but the fit becomes more complicated. As the
background component is not linear in the full range. The only purpose
of this plot is to convince the reader that the omega is really an omega
and not a rho. We are thinking about providing this plot in
supplementary material without the fit.
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Dear LHCb Colleague,
The comment (LHCB-PAPER-2017-039-001-COMMENT-005) that you made on LHCB-PAPER-2017-039-001
(entitled: 'Search for the suppressed $\Lambda^+_c \to p \mu^+ \mu^-$ deacy and observation of the $\Lambda^+_c \to p \omega$ decay') has itself been commented on by Marcin Jakub Chrzaszcz [CERN - EP/LBD] (marcin.chrzaszcz(a)cern.ch).
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Dear Patrick,
Tim Gershon also insisted on some systematic uncertainty, and I think it was requested by the RC at some point. So this is a widely shared concern. They both proposed to include a systematic using the RMS of the efficiency over q2, but I think to include the efficiency in q2 bins would be even better.
Cheers,Mick
-------- Oorspronkelijk bericht --------Van: Patrick Koppenburg <patrick.koppenburg(a)cern.ch> Datum: 30-10-17 17:21 (GMT+01:00) Aan: Mick Mulder <mmulder(a)nikhef.nl>, bfys-physics(a)nikhef.nl Onderwerp: Re: [Bfys-physics] Fwd: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2017-039, Search for the suppressed $\Lambda^+_c \to p \mu^+ \mu^-$ decay and observation of the $\Lambda^+_c \to p \omega$ decay
Dear Mick,
Here are my comments on the paper. We need to decide how much we
insist about my 1st physics comment. Anyone else agrees?
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Physics:
- L.147: We disagree with this strategy. As you do not provide an
efficiency map versus the Dalitz plane, interested readers cannot
recast your limit to their favourite model. You actually do not
even give an indication of how the efficiency varies on the DP. We
suggest you either assign a systematic uncertainty or provide an
efficiency map.
- L.153: We hope that what you did is not what is described in
the text. The polynomial pdf describes the background, not the
non-resonant region. You must have tried to fit the \Lc somehow in
order to get a limit. Why don't you show the peak (which my be
negative) and give the fitted yield?
General:
- PRL does not have sections.
- You mix British and American spelling. You may use either (PRL
will translate if needed) but be consistent.\
- It is a pity no additional plots are provided.
Line-by-line:
Abstract: "A search for contributions from flavour-changing
neutral currents to the decay \decay{\Lc}{...}". Below, we suggest
to add the range of q^2 your BF limit corresponds to.
L.18-20: you mix mumu and ll modes. At this level you should stick
to ll. Aslo, use \ellell and define what \ell stands for.
L.20: .\footnote{...} The (you miss the space and have the dot at
the wrong place)
L.23: vector-meson
L.24: In this Letter. But actually the letter reports only. So
here you mean the analysis.
L.27: [4] reporting a signal yield of 11.1\pm5.0\pm2.5 and an
upper limit...
L.29: remove "It is worth pointing out that" (everything we write
is worth pointing out)
L.31: Remove However
L.32: stimulates -> motivates
L.33: Similar processes in the \Dp system have not been found to
date.
L.36: using data corresponding to 3\invfb
L.37: to the decay \decay{\Lc}{p\phi} with \decay{\phi}{\mumu}
L.37: add that \phi stands for \phi(1020) throughout.
L.67: at the $pp$ collision point or in \bquark-hadron decays. (do
you need the word "prompt"?)
L.75: events -> decays
L.78: required to be of good quality and have \pt
L.82: Three dimuon mass regions are defined : * a region... and so
on
L.83 and everywhere else: \mevcc already contains a space before
MeV, so do not add one yourself.
Fig.1: we suggest to add "\phi region"
L.103: remove "candidates"
L.103: for the final optimisation of the selection
L.106: no need of "baryon"
L.112: the one -> that
L.113: An irreducible background originates from (it's not
dangerous once identified)
L.115: \rhoz. the \omega meson
L.123: remove "the following formula"
Table 1: all rows are called "efficiency ratio". You could drop
that term.
L.128: remove "the following formula:" (never put a colon)
L.140: remove "one"
L.146: remove "the relevant columns of"
L.147: according to a phase-space model.
L.148: see above. But the actual decay is not a model. It's
Nature.
Fig.2: We suggest you add the \Lc component to the top plot. Plese
label the plots as non-resonant, phi and omega so they can be
re-used in talks easily. The - on mu- should be longer (also in
following plots).
L.153: For the nonresonant region, a first-order... (but see
above)
L.157-9: no need to refere to figs 2a, 2b, 2c. One fr Fig 2 is
enough.
L.158: candidates -> decays
L.158: events -> candidates
Fig.4: It's hard to put a {\cal B} on an axis legend, but avoid BR
while you write B in the paper.
L.165: the -> an
L.168, 172, 174, 176: remove ":"
L.176+1: . -> ,
L.182: 5.0\sigma (no space)
L.184: from BaBar -> by the BaBar collaboration
[1] There should be no number 7 in the reference
[5] why not R_K*?
[22] use the template
[28] use the template
Cheers,
On 10/26/2017 11:17 AM, Patrick
Koppenburg wrote:
Hi all,
By the virtue of the self-screwing procedure, Mick is
volunteering to collect comments for this paper. Thanks Mick.
On 10/24/2017 01:16 PM, Mick Mulder
wrote:
Dear all,
This paper was assigned to us on the 19th. If I remember
correctly it is the analysis of the new PhD student at
ATLAS, Marko.
Marko did his Master thesis on this channel, but the results
presented here are those of the Krakow analysis. They are slightly
more precise. I don't know the history.
Mick, please let the list know by when you need the comments.
Cheers,
Patrick
The deadline is on the 2nd of November, so next week on
Thursday.
Cheers,
Mick
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Onderwerp:
First circulation of publication draft for
PAPER-2017-039, Search for the suppressed
$\Lambda^+_c \to p \mu^+ \mu^-$ decay and
observation of the $\Lambda^+_c \to p \omega$ decay
Datum:
Thu, 19 Oct 2017 15:36:23 +0000
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LHCb-PAPER-2017-039-reviewers(a)cern.ch
Dear Colleagues,
A draft paper is available for your comments. Team leaders, verify the author list and check for reading obligations of your group (see below)!
Title : Search for the suppressed $\Lambda^+_c \to p \mu^+ \mu^-$ decay and observation of the $\Lambda^+_c \to p \omega$ decay
Journal : PRL
Contact authors : Marcin_Chrzaszcz
Reviewers : Tom_Blake (chair), Harry_Cliff
EB reviewer : Simon_Eidelman
EB readers : Roland_Waldi, Roberta_Santacesaria
Analysis note : ANA-2016-015
Deadline : 2-Nov-2017
e-group : lhcb-paper-2017-039-reviewers
Link : https://cds.cern.ch/record/2289981
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Twiki : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/view/LHCbPhysics/Lc2PMuMu
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