Dear all,

I will not attend the Friday meeting as I'll be at ICHEP. I find the paper extremely well written and have only very few comments left. I should add I have not yet read the parallel PRD paper and so am unbiased by this one.

Title: "overlapping spin-1 and 3 states" is a bit technical for PRL. Can't we write the DsJ(2860) is a degenerate state of spin 1 and 3?
L.100: \B candidate -> \Bs candidate
L.102-3: This sentence comes too early. It's not clear what is integrated (though easy to guess).
L.111: "peak-to-peak" is mysterious to me.
L.115: Kpi -> \Km{}\pip
L.122: lineshape is misspelled
Fig.3 : The components are invisible on a printed version. Fig e could be made a bit wider and less grassy (or maybe d and e could be merged and shown in log scale?). The 2.77-2.91 range could be shown in fig e.
Fig.4 a legend would help. The caption mentions only red and green while there are line styles too.

Cheers,

Patrick

On 25/06/14 15:24, Tjeerd Ketel wrote:
Dear all,

We have a new paper to comment before 8 July.

I propose to discuss it on Friday 4 July after the master presentation
by Lennaert Bel.

Please, do volunteer to introduce this paper and collect our comments.

Best regards,
   Tjeerd


----- Doorgestuurd bericht van rudolf.oldeman@cern.ch -----
    Datum: Tue, 24 Jun 2014 21:04:51 +0000
      Van: Rolf Oldeman <rudolf.oldeman@cern.ch>
 Onderwerp: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2014-035, Observation of overlapping spin-1 and spin-3 states at $m(\overline{D}^0K^-) \sim 2.86$ GeV/$c^2$
      Aan: "lhcb-general (LHCb General mailing list)" <lhcb-general@cern.ch>

Dear Colleagues,

A paper is available for your comments:

Title           :
Observation of overlapping spin-1 and spin-3 states at $m(\overline{D}^0K^-) \sim 2.86$ GeV/$c^2$

Journal         : PRL
Contact authors : Daniel Craik, Mark Whitehead, Tim Gershon
Reviewers       : Tomasz Skwarnicki (chair),
                  Fernando Martinez Vidal
EB reviewer     : Wouter Hulsbergen
EB readers      : Claudia Patrignani, Ronan McNulty
Analysis note   : ANA-2013-022
Deadline        : 08-Jul-2014
e-group         : lhcb-paper-2014-035-reviewers
Link            : https://cds.cern.ch/record/1711270
Authors         : LHCb
Twiki           : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/viewauth/LHCbPhysics/Bs2DKpiDALITZ

The following institutes are requested to make institutional comments:
LAPP, Annecy-Le-Vieux, France
Tsinghua University, China
PNPI, Gatchina, Russia
Bristol, United Kingdom
EPFL, Lausanne, Switzerland
NIKHEF, Netherlands


Please send any comments via the CDS system. It is the responsibility
of the contact authors to provide replies on all comments
made. Subsequent modification to the publication are made in
consultation with the reviewers and during the EB reading. Following
this, there will be a final meeting of the editorial board with
contact authors and reviewers present where final decisions are
made. As the last step a short presentation is given to the
collaboration and the paper is sent for publication.

You can find all paper and conference report drafts open for comments
via the EB web-page, by clicking on Current Drafts.

http://lhcb.web.cern.ch/lhcb/lhcb_page/collaboration/organization/editorial_board/default.html

Regards,
      Rolf Oldeman



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