Hi Tjeerd et al.,

I read the paper; here are my (few) comments.

1)
In the paper we present Bs->J/psi gamma and B0->J/psi gamma BRs.
The Bs are measured for the first time; the B0 is roughly the same as BaBar.
Is this the reason why only Bs is mentioned in Fig.2 and in Fig.3 (and not B0)?
Probably B0 is too small to be seen in Fig2, but I guess we should show the CLs for  B0 in a similar figure as in Fig3?

2) 
Line 211 - 214 spelling typo's in "pseduoexperiments". Comma before "which", "large*R*".

3) 
We mention explicitly that the channel is sensitive to right-handed currents and charged Higgs. 
Why are these two stressed? It could be anything, including left handed W-primes etc?

cheers,
- Marcel 


On 1 September 2015 at 12:03, Tjeerd Ketel <tjeerd@nikhef.nl> wrote:
Dear all,

We have a new paper assigned to comment on.
It would be nice if there is a volunteer for Friday 4 September
to lead the discussion on this paper.
Friday 11 September is "sportdag" and rather close
before the deadline on Monday 14.

Best regards,
   Tjeerd
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Date: Mon, 31 Aug 2015 07:25:39 +0000
From: George Lafferty <george.lafferty@manchester.ac.uk>
To: LHCb General mailing list <lhcb-general@cern.ch>
Subject: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2015-044,
    Search for the rare decays $B^0 \to J/\psi \gamma$ and $B^0_s \to J/\psi
    \gamma$
Resent-Date: Mon, 31 Aug 2015 09:26:56 +0200
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Dear Colleagues,

A draft paper is available for your comments:

Title           : Search for the rare decays $B^0 \to J/\psi \gamma$ and $B^0_s \to J/\psi \gamma$

Journal         : PRD
Contact authors : Matthew_Kenzie, Patrick_Owen
Reviewers       : Paolo_Gandini (chair), 
                  Vanya_Belyaev
EB reviewer     : Claudia_Patrignani
EB readers      : Nicola_Serra, Ronan_McNulty
Analysis note   : ANA-2014-096
Deadline        : 14-Sep-2015
e-group         : lhcb-paper-2015-044-reviewers
Link            : https://cds.cern.ch/record/2048029
Authors         : LHCb 
Twiki           : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/viewauth/LHCbPhysics/Bs2JpsiGamma

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