Dear all,
I have combined the comments I got from Wouter, Jeroen, Patrick and Gerco (and added my own). Full list attached. I removed one question from Gerco on the frame of reference for \Delta\phi: it's a transverse quantity, so it does not depend on the boost (unless you meant to ask for the effect of the beam crossing angle) - I can add it again if you insist. There is also one from Patrick that I do not understand:
L286: "refine the sample of candidates for analysis" is jargon. "to reduce
the same size used in the analysis"
Please let me know by Monday lunchtime if there are more comments to be included, or if I missed anything.
Thanks,
Pieter