Hi all,
here are my comments on the gamma paper.
Cheers,
Patrick
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Physics: Your fit in Fig.2 indicates that the part reco background is 100% of the data below 5000 MeV. That seems unlikely. There must be B->DKnpi decays kicking in. By eye the contribution from comb background could easily be half of what you fit. In the systematics it seems you vary within stat uncertainties, which is 10% of this background. What happens if you vary it within 50%?
Text: L.3: how many current flavour physics experiments are there? L.12: "more than 10" could be anything. Why not quote 11 degrees from 1406.6311 ? And why not give the central values for B factories and LHCb? L.15: a sentence explaining why global fits get 2 degrees would be useful. In particular on what they assume. L.35: ratio r_B of interfering amplitudes ... (connects with next sentence) L.36: expected -> measured L.48: {\cal H} is undefined, but probably OK Eq.2: the star is unusual. Is that intentional? L.55: Suddenly a "we" L.58: no colon L.62: this sentence is mysterious without reading [10]. Can you explain briefly why? L.69: Section 2 (start of paragraph) L.83: say the polarity can be reversed. You'll need it later. L.123: pt is already defined, but OK. L.124: flight distance significance wrt what? The PV or the origin vertex (B or D)? How do you define this significance? d/err? That's not a significance. L.134: ADS/GLW is undefined. Explain how that paper differs from the present. L.151: We understand you use log for convenience, but are surprised it improves the BDT. A BDT is a set of splits. Any monotonous transformation would leave that unchanged. L.167: A reference here would be useful. Or at least the argument of l.364 L.221: the one -> that L.222: published by LHCb is not needed here Eq.7 and 8: model, mass and cand should be in roman. L.266-269: add charges to all particles where applicable. L.271: remove space before footnote L.394-413: add charges to all particles where applicable. L.404: why [51] and not [21]? Fig.6-10: amazingly you managed to write this paper without ever using GGSZ. So remove it here too. L.458: any comment on how to combine the two results? Or not to combine them? The papers will come out at the same time, so both should say something. [6] is also by the CKMfitter group (though arxiv doesn't say so). [8,9] why not in chronological order? [34] Belle collaboration [39,42,47] seem to have unsplittable journal refs. Is your LHCb.bst old?
On 26/02/16 13:10, Tjeerd Ketel wrote:
Dear colleagues,
Wrong cds address in previous email https://cds.cern.ch/record/213404 must be 2134041
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