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Abstract: Remove "prior to the forthcoming Daliz plot analyses with Run I data sample" after "Updated branching ... are also presented," Normally, we only give an abstract on what is presented in the paper.
Line 39: Replace "They will benefit of the" by "We will benefit from". We will analyze the data, so we will benefit. "Benefit of" is used with a noun. "Benefit from" is used with a verb.
Line 174,175: "Events" and "candidates" are not well defined. Probably, they are "triggered events" and "B candidates". It is not made clear why the other candidates are not retained.
Figure 2: The caption is a repetition of that of figure 1. After its correction mention only the part that is different and refer to the caption of figure 1 for the rest.
Line 387: Replace "their former determinations" by "our former publication". Reverse "supersede" and "are in good agreement with".
Line 392: Replace "confidence belts" by confidence contours".
Line 309: Replace "will follow from and benefit of the" by "will benefit from the".
On Maandag 1 Mei 2017 16:33 CEST, Gerco Onderwater c.j.g.onderwater@rug.nl wrote:
Dear all,
I just discovered that Groningen (and hence Nikhef) is assigned the review of the draft below. As there will no bfys meeting between now and the deadline, I propose that I collect your comments and send them in.
Greetings,
Gerco
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From: Fergus Wilson Fergus.Wilson@stfc.ac.uk Subject: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2017-010, Search for the decay $B^0_s \to K^0_S K^+ K^-$ Date: 28 April 2017 at 13:25:13 GMT+2 To: "lhcb-general (LHCb General mailing list)" lhcb-general@cern.ch Cc: "LHCb-PAPER-2017-010-reviewers (LHCb-PAPER-2017-010-reviewers)" LHCb-PAPER-2017-010-reviewers@cern.ch Resent-From: c.onderwater@cern.ch
Dear Colleagues,
A draft paper is available for your comments.
Team leaders, verify the author list and check for reading obligations of your group!
Title : Search for the decay $B^0_s \to K^0_S K^+ K^-$
Journal : JHEP Contact authors : Louis_Henry, Christos_Hadjivasiliou Reviewers : Bernardo_Adeva (chair), Alberto_Lusiani EB reviewer : Alberto_Correa_dos_Reis EB readers : Mike_WIlliams, Patrick_Koppenburg Analysis note : ANA-2014-043 Deadline : 12-May-2017 e-group : lhcb-paper-2017-010-reviewers Link : https://cds.cern.ch/record/2261508 Authors : LHCb Twiki : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/view/LHCbPhysics/B2KshhBFAnalysis
The following institutes are requested to make institutional comments: Roma_Tor_Vergata__Roma__Italy Groningen__The_Netherlands Bucharest-Magurele__Romania Padova__Italy Maryland__United_States Tsinghua_University__Beijing__China
Please send any comments via the CDS system. It is the responsibility of the contact authors to provide replies to all comments made. Subsequent modifications to the draft will be made in consultation with the reviewers and during the EB reading. Following this, there will be a final meeting of the editorial board, with contact authors and reviewers present, when final decisions will be made. As the last step, the collaboration will be given a final opportunity to comment during a 'silent approval' period.
You can find all paper and conference report drafts open for comments via the EB web-page, by clicking on Current Drafts:
http://lhcb.web.cern.ch/lhcb/lhcb_page/collaboration/organization/editorial_...
Best regards, Fergus
Fergus Wilson, PPD, Rutherford Appleton Laboratory, Harwell Campus, Didcot, Oxon, OX11 0QX, UK. Tel: +44-(0)1235 445259 Fax: +44-(0)1235 445672 CERN Tel: +41-22 76 77379 Skype: ferguswilson5259
- Gerco
Dr. C.J.G. Onderwater Van Swinderen Institute University of Groningen Nijenborgh 4 NL-9747 AG Groningen the Netherlands Tel. +31(0)50-3633557 / 8774