Hi Niels,
Here are mine.
Physics: you use two samples and hence only half of the data for training. Could you have gained more with n-folding?
L.138: do you believe these two acceptances within the uncertainties you give? You then re-use these statistical uncertainties as systematic. I am sure Pythia gets the \Bc/\Bu production ratios more wrong than that. Have you calibrated to the \Bc production paper? There should be a systematic coming from this calibration.
First paragraph: lacks a bit of structure. It's a collection of facts, but the reader is wondering what is relevant and how it's connected to what you measure. L.2: spurious space before footnote. Move footnote to L.66, where you need it. Fig.1: extracted -> determined. L.79: events -> candidates L.91 and elsewhere : Fig.~\ref{...} L.110: spurious ! L.122: each candidate, depending on its location in the ... L.126: I think <a> is more commeon to mean average than \overline{a}. Or just write "average of ... on the ROI". Generally there's a lot of maths that could be turned into words. L.140-144: This collection of numbers is somewhat boring. Is it needed? Systematics : you should explain in words how these numbers are obtained. Maybe Section 5 and 6 could be merged, as you talk about corrections in both. Table 1: 3 -> 3.0. L.167: @ -> at [2] $B_c$
Cheers,
Patrick
On 05/02/16 11:07, Niels Tuning wrote:
Dear all,
Please send me your comments by Wednesday morning. (I attach already my comments, with Wouters coments on the J/psi constraints already added.).
My main points are below; let me know if you know the answers already...
Cheers, Niels
General
- Given the similarities with the Bc->KKpi analysis, was it considered to merge the two analysis in one paper?
Questions
- L.11 Is there a paper you can refer to concerning the sensitivity
to the Beyond the Standard Model physics?
- L.70/71 We do not understand what the different production fractions
have to do with the fiducial cuts?
- L.167 We tried to get a back-of-the-envelop limit:
if you measure 0 events, then the upper limit is ~4 events? Then we get the limit : (eff_u/eff_c)*(4/1644)*BR(B+) = 6 x 10^-9, rather than 3.6 x 10^-8 ?
- L.167 Did you use the J/psi mass constraint and/or known J/psi
lineshape to achieve optimal sensitivity in the Rp^J/psi limit?
- Fig.5 Why would you plot p-values for negative Rp values ?
On Fri, 29 Jan 2016, Tjeerd Ketel wrote:
Dear all,
We have a paper for Nikhef to comment on. Please volunteer to introduce it. We may discuss it after Vasileios' presentation on Friday 5 February.
Best regards, Tjeerd
---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: Fri, 29 Jan 2016 16:07:00 +0000 From: George Lafferty george.lafferty@manchester.ac.uk To: LHCb General mailing list lhcb-general@cern.ch Subject: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2016-001, Search for $B_c$ decays to the $p \bar{p}\pi$ final state Resent-Date: Fri, 29 Jan 2016 17:08:36 +0100 Resent-From: lhcb-general-dynamic@cern.ch
Dear Colleagues,
A draft paper is available for your comments:
Title : Search for $B_c$ decays to the $p \bar{p}\pi$ final state
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