Dear Niels,
Sorry, I am late with my final comments. I combined them with the text you circulated already yesterday in the attachment (comments-bfys-13092013a.txt).
Best regards, Tjeerd
On Mon, 16 Sep 2013, Niels Tuning wrote:
Hi Maurizio,
- I found the abstract difficult to read due to a slightly confused
period. Can you try to remove a few commas and separate sentences? -> Would you have a concrete suggestion?
I would actually rephrase removing all the commas, but I am not a native english speaker, and I am maybe biased. "The f1(1285) mixing angle between the strange and non-strange components of its wave function in the qqbar structure model is determined to be +-(...)."
Perfect!
- L351-352: [Q: We don't understand this sentence and it's importance in
the context.] -> what do you mean exactly?
I don't understand what is the decay model they are referring to in the paper. Maybe I am missing something. Can you help me?
Mh, there phrasing is quite sloppy: "For the B0 high mass shape we change from a Gaussian shape to a second order polynomial."
I think they mean this: "For the shape of the m(4pi) distribution above the f1(1285) resonance in the B0 case, the Gaussian shape is changed to a second order polynomial."
Cheers, Niels
- L363: How are these factors calculated?
-> I would be tempted to omit this comment?
can be removed.
Thanks,
Maurizio
Maurizio Martinelli LHCb Nikhef CERN, office 13-1-26 CH-1211 Genève Tel: +41 (0)227676309
On Sep 13, 2013, at 4:59 PM, Niels Tuning wrote:
Hi Maurizio,
I am collecting the various comments. I've got a few questions to you;
- I found the abstract difficult to read due to a slightly confused
period. Can you try to remove a few commas and separate sentences? -> Would you have a concrete suggestion?
- L351-352: [Q: We don't understand this sentence and it's importance in
the context.] -> what do you mean exactly?
- L363: How are these factors calculated?
-> I would be tempted to omit this comment?
Ciao, Niels
On Thu, 12 Sep 2013, Maurizio Martinelli wrote:
Hi Tjeerd,
unfortunately I cannot attend the meeting this friday because I'll be in Krakow. I took anyway the advantage of the flight to read this paper and I have a few comments, that you can find attached.
Thanks,
Maurizio
Maurizio Martinelli LHCb Nikhef CERN, office 13-1-26 CH-1211 Genève Tel: +41 (0)227676309
On Sep 5, 2013, at 2:31 PM, Tjeerd Ketel wrote:
Dear all,
I propose to discuss this paper on 13 September Friday morning 10-11 h. It would be nice if somebody volunteered to give a short introduction and collect the comments. Please, let me know as soon as possible. Deadline for our comments on CDS is 17 September.
Best regards, Tjeerd
---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: Tue, 3 Sep 2013 20:47:20 +0000 From: Rolf Oldeman rudolf.oldeman@cern.ch To: "lhcb-general (LHCb General mailing list)" lhcb-general@cern.ch Subject: First circulation of publication draft for PAPER-2013-055, Observation of $\overline{B}^0_{(s)}\to J/\psi f_1(1285)$ decays and measurement of the $f_1(1285)$ mixing angle
Dear Colleagues,
A paper is available for your comments:
Title : Observation of $\overline{B}^0_{(s)}\to J/\psi f_1(1285)$ decays and measurement of the $f_1(1285)$ mixing angle
Journal : PRL Contact authors : Liming Zhang, Sheldon Stone Reviewers : Marco Pappagallo (chair), Jussara Miranda EB reviewer : Burkhard Schmidt EB readers : Joerg Marks, Eugenie Grauges Analysis note : ANA-2013-062 Deadline : 17-Sep-2013 e-group : lhcb-paper-2013-055-reviewers Link : http://cds.cern.ch/record/1596791 Authors : LHCb Twiki : https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/viewauth/LHCbPhysics/JpsiFourpi
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