Hi all,
The Lambdab->p3pi paper is in 2nd circulation until Monday. Here are my comments. I'll submit them on Monday but am happy to insert any additional comment.
Cheers,
Patrick
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Dear Jinlin, Nicola, Maurizio, Andrea,
The paper is much improved wrt the 1st circulation and better suited for a non HEP audience. Here are a few more comments
L.11: (quark content $bud$) [ It may not be obvious that these are quarks)
L.13: non-negligible -> sizeable [ negligible is always wrt to something ]
L.25: This repeats L.6
Fig.1: The diagrams could be improved, but we believe Nature will do that anyway.
L.40: No colons before equations
L.81: events -> $pp$ collisions events [ This is HEP jargon. You give several different meanings to event, see below. Here it's the correct use https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Event_%28particle_physics%29, but being precise does not harm.]
L.93: events -> decays
Fig.2: extract -> determine
L.145: make this a full paragraph break.
L.257 and 259: Use -- for ranges.
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Patrick Koppenburg